Listen to the Sighs!!!

by Lonely Rider   Mar 19, 2010


Listen to the Sighs!!! (Rictameter)

Beauty,
ethereal,
maimed by cancerous dust
lurking behind a shadow of
incessant greed,blind to howls of nature.
Endangered by our folly, deep gash
bedecks its lovely face,
wilting ageless
beauty.

beckons
mellowed voices,
buried by grinding teeth
of metallic saws, beheading
glorious elements of graceful life,
clawed by selfish desires, still
with every dying hope
whimpering sighs
beckons.

**Rictameter is a scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, 10 Then down again, 8, 6, 4, 2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    Great job on the form and opening readers eyes to the destruction man is doing to our beautiful Earth.
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Rictameters are so much fun for me and I love seeing them put to good use. This was a lovely piece, so full of life and you :) Very nice work dear.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its a pity how greed is slowly destroying mother nature & very soon our children will
    not have anything left to see..good job with
    the form as well as the message :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Raj, nice job with the form and the message in your words. Brings to mind the cutting of trees in the forest. You can almost hear those sighs from the trees. Well done.