Michael difficult for me to read and assess as a poem with such a theme needs to hit and hit hard and it seems to be lacking something. God has never been a question he has always been the answer to me if only the rest of the world knew him as I do and accepted his love and understanding he is love, yes he would bring us peace if he had not left this world in our hands as I believe our proving ground for us to take forward one to his Kingdom. Good poem that needs a bit more to strike home the words . 4/5 Ray S |
Wow, fantastic write. I really enjoyed it. The only real piece of advise I have is to use "love ruled" instead of "loved ruled" it seems to flow nicer. Overall a great write, keep up the good work. |
by Rachael
I liked it...it would be quite a different world if love ruled rather than everyone's negative emotions! However, we must keep in mind that love can sometimes encourage people to act out of jealousy, hatred, greed, spite, etc. I like the reference to religion throughout the poem...it becomes more and more evident every day how much God's guidance is needed in this world. Great job!! |
by Maria
I definitely appreciate the message you were trying to send here, love is very important, and should be held above everything else. I am not really into the whole religious thing, my ideas of God aren't the same as they are to you I'm sure, but I must not be biased. This was a pretty good write. |
by azurelady
Yet another fantastic poem from you! Beautiful message, warmth, and sincerity. Truly a diamond in the rough in such a trying time for so many. |
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That would be the most greatest of all greatests; if love ruled. Then those who not know how to love can learn to love. I truly enjoyed this piece. God hasn't been the question for me. He has been the answer. |
by The Princess
Interesting piece. most people think that if they were in another's shoes they'd make a difference, however it's not another person we need it's different values and way of thinking. things like mutual love and care and being human (which seems to disappear these days) maybe then we'd all collectively rule a world and a world worth ruling at that. |