Comments : Goodbye

  • 14 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Woow , how true its a brilliant work , facts on truths base i really love the way you set thess lines clear

    people tell me to laugh ; don't look so sad
    & not to cry
    but i don't know what it's like
    to be happy
    & they don't know what it's like
    to be like me.

    10/10 keep the thoughts coming to show people the real meaning of being real ;)

  • 14 years ago

    by always the same

    Wooow
    so real and really deep
    brought tears to my eyes
    no one can tell you how to feel
    but im here if you ever want to explain it

  • 14 years ago

    by Siham

    Bravo , sooo emotional & meaningful
    5/5 really worth reading over & over

  • 14 years ago

    by Frannie Swanson

    I had some things to say and dont take that offensively. its a really good poem and i know what you feel and what you go through. i go through it everyday in my life. my heart is agape and bleeding from inside and out. i just understand you so well. you remind me of myself. and im younger than you. i just think that your poems relate to me in a way i cant even explain.. keep this up... i like what im hearing.
    10/10

  • 13 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    I really love this poem. its so emotional and i love that.