I Wish You Were Here

Your ending . . . . is perfect - the last paragraph is amazing - thank you for a great piece!

Sourav
Another beautiful poen you have penned. Full of sadness yet laced with the love of someone who is no longer with you.

Evening breeze passes by
Dreamy memories fly high
Imagine your face so clear
I wish you were here

How many times we close our eyes do we see the face of the one we loved. Treasuring the memories of our hearts.

Tragic end of a fairy tale
No queen, no nightingale
Sometimes loneliness is fear
Alas! I wish you were here.

Being left alone is a terrible feeling. Being without that special person is the lonliest feeling there is.
Excellent job!
Take care
*hugs
Cindy

This was wonderful. I haven't been on a while so it was nice to read this lovely piece once I got back on. Nice work dear :) Nik

Yes sometimes loneliness is fear..a poem that
yearns for love..very nice & touching.

Loved it , sums up how I feel , too