Comments : I Wish You Were Here

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Loved it , sums up how I feel , too

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes sometimes loneliness is fear..a poem that
    yearns for love..very nice & touching.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was wonderful. I haven't been on a while so it was nice to read this lovely piece once I got back on. Nice work dear :) Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sourav
    Another beautiful poen you have penned. Full of sadness yet laced with the love of someone who is no longer with you.

    Evening breeze passes by
    Dreamy memories fly high
    Imagine your face so clear
    I wish you were here

    How many times we close our eyes do we see the face of the one we loved. Treasuring the memories of our hearts.

    Tragic end of a fairy tale
    No queen, no nightingale
    Sometimes loneliness is fear
    Alas! I wish you were here.

    Being left alone is a terrible feeling. Being without that special person is the lonliest feeling there is.
    Excellent job!
    Take care
    *hugs
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Your ending . . . . is perfect - the last paragraph is amazing - thank you for a great piece!