I imagine...I believe

by Lady Nik   Mar 20, 2010


Maybe tonight we can
forget about it all.
Stand like statues in rushing
water and not be moved.
Hold our ground, think
our thoughts and all will
be lost. Maybe tonight
we can live the way
our dreams do. Freely--
unchained, no restraints
just fictitious fairy tales
silhouetted by silk smiles
and glamorous gleams

Automatic..I imagine

a time when I will jump
from cloud to cloud and never
touch the wax atmosphere
beneath me. Branches of
metallic blueberries will sway
fusing with the August night breeze.
Lovely the way the world works
when you're just a child.

so I believe...

*I used the lyrics "Maybe tonight we can forget about it all" and "Automatic. I imagine. I believe" From the song "The Fantasy" by 30 Seconds to Mars

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  • 14 years ago

    by Anthony M

    Unusual form, but it works well and is easy to read. Left me with a smile remembering the carefree days of childhood.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ooooo..this is penned very nicely my dear.
    It flowed well & each line had that feeling of
    wanting freedom to love freely..good write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nik
    It would be great if we could keep our childhood fantasies and feelings. Beautiful piece. To bad we have to grow up and have the reality of life hit us.
    Great job!
    Take Care
    *hugs
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Lovely poem 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Lovely poem 5/5

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