woah! great work Tyler. yay im the first to coment lol. i really wish i could write like u. ur amazing

that was good i do agree oh my god tyler i hope you are proud of me i agree with someone for once yeah what has happened love much
holly

That was really good Tyler!! I agree with Amy..I wish I could write like you!! You have such talent!! You're so amazing!!
Amy

sorry for posting this twice... one time i signed on and nothing was there... so i posted it... but yea

Another Fantastic Poem Tyler, You Are A True Inspiration xxx

Wow! that was amazing! I loved the repeats and the additions to the repeats... and all the stanzas between the repeats! LOL :o)

You really are an amazing writer! Keep up the great work!