I enjoyed the repetition in this piece I thought it made it very strong. A memory that brings back a thrill is always a nice memory to have, but theirs two sides to that coin. Sometimes the memories we have aren't the memories we want at all. Nicely done

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I can only say what I like and I am impressed with the though and sentiment that went into this well written poem

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The message has been presented very clearly. I enjoyed reading it and the repetition was nice. Remembering something can be a good, though memories do not always need to be positive. Thanks for sharing this well written poem.