by Single girl Mar 22, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Sitting here thinkin of you.. |
by AJ
The content of this poem is strong and it appeals to many people. However, the way it is laid out it distracting from the point. You should shorten some of the lines to extend the stanzas to make it more aesthetically pleasing. Also your use of "..." is incorrect in several places, you only need two periods to create a trailing off effect. |