This was a very interesting and enlightening view on life, (or for you, a special someone). i wasn't quite sure about the title, but i chose it because it had the least comments. but im glad i did and i might look at your other stuff now.

i really enjoyed the concept and i felt like i understood what you were saying and it left me with a nice feeling and sense or the present. and maybe a hidden message to stop living in the past.

thanks for sharing (and for the comment)
~Kuro

This is an interesting piece. Completely unexpected. The title certainly gives nothing away - and I am not completely sure about this title, although it does do it's job.

I'm a little speechless, but here goes:

Firstly flow and rhyme were spot on.
The content was a surprise, but a pleasant one. This is quite an enjoyable read.
To me it sounds as though you are really close to this friend or you may have feelings for them...??
Anyway a great write.

Corrections:
First line:
I,N,G -- I think you should write it as you have the title with the '-' in between the letters .. or is this how it's written in the dictionary or something, because that's the impression I get from the first line. The line itself doesn't give much away it kind of leaves you thinking 'WTF?' LOL

Third stanza; third line:
'Done some many' - should be 'Done so many'

Also, once again watch the capitalisation of your 'i' and 'i'm'

Keep up the great work! 5/5