Wow.
That was really good.
It gave me the chills just reading it.
You have talent.
Keep writing.
And while I am commenting here is one of my favorite quotes
"We navigate our whole lives using words. Change and improve the words and I believe we can change and improve life." -Anonymous
lol
This is random but this quote really is true.

Jessica this poem is simply beautiful ,
I think you have opened a door here that will lead you deeper into self expression where a more prevailant beauty will abound ...you should re-read this one &
I think each time a different verse will surface as the most important for the moment , I know my poem :--Someone I once Knew ...had that effect on me , I hope you take the time to read it ...Definately a 5/5...Always your friend ...Jim