A refreshing and unique idea in a love poem. Well done.

I have to agree with the above. Nice use of idea and the language that played around it.
Keep up the work!

Aww.. this is wonderful! Loved the title and the theme. And how you ended this piece. Unique! Well done Lady Nik! :) Lol

D'awwww

this was cute and i liked the metaphor at the end. nice job <3

The street becomes crowed with life
as we fade into the nothingness of sleep
I know I'm an imperfect being
but when dreaming of you perfection is achieved

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I liked that stanza best of all
Nice flow
Well done..
Loved it hunny.

The poem was good, until the last stanza. All the stanzas were very good, infact, the rhyming was nice, and the pictures you described there were very vivid. The last stanza didn't end with a rhyme, so the flow was off there. This poem is a case of a good start, but an imperfect end.
I liked the concept of this poem, but it lacked something. Don't think it's such a big deal though 4/5