Wow ... again, i loved it! you have a talent for expressing yourself ...

"four months have passed
and i still cry myself asleep
waking up every morning
wishing it was all a dream"
- i like that last line a lot!

Real deep love... but u gotta change some "you" into "i".. kinda got confuse... but yea ur a great poet

Can can really relate to this
It describes what I went through with my ex

Hes with someone else
and you cant breathe
and all off a sudden
nothing is what it seams

You cry because you thought
you were his only
but now hes with her
and your sad and lonley.

Its time to let go
of what you once new.
its time to let go
its time to get over you

^
Those three stanzas were amazging darl
So sad and emotional that I can relate to

Beatiful write(:
5/5 from me x