Comments : My Haven...

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice. Love like a lighthouse, that is an original thought and your words have given us images of that. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Wow! nicely done. all from using an image. you gave each character an emotion and described the surrounding well. i felt like i could see the picture in my mind. very interesting idea. i should try that sometime.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Like a lighthouse ever watchful,
    your love, has always been to me.
    As deep as the deepest ocean,
    lasting for all Eternity...

    THis stanza stood out for me. I like the way
    you described love like the lighthouse, which
    always shines..nicely written!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    You did such a wonderful job with this piece for the image contest :)
    Your words matched the image so well.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was a lovely piece of work dear. I greatly enjoyed reading it. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Beauttiful as always :)
    5/5, Em