Life.

by ImIndelible   Mar 26, 2010


We act as if our life is horrible
yet, we then too see what lies ahead of us
we don't look beyond, but we look behind.
Our past is our problem
and our future is our solution.
We worry about a hole in the sidewalk,
or a tear in our jeans.
We aren't satisfied to what is given to us,
if we were, then there would be no thing such as problems,
but our life would be full of sameness.

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  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    True, very very true. I liked this a lot because of the amount of truth that it holds.

    "Our past is our problem
    and our future is our solution."
    - i loved this bit here!

    However i think you could have ended it a little stronger.
    "full of sameness" that kind of sounds a little strange, but overall a great piece

    5/5