Comments : Memories

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Memories fade over time but not entirely. They come back perhaps triggered by a thought, an image, a word. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Great work Aussy :] I miss your work. Very nice. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Just a few minor grammar errors, look over it again for those but otherwise very nice done, nice to be able to read your poetry again.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Austin
    Someimes memories are all we have to keep us going.

    A picture brings forward words,
    As memories cover time and deter
    In past, present, and future;
    Perfect but sometimes blurred

    This was my favorite stanza. There are times when I want to remember something so badly. Yet it won't come to my mind. The memories seem to come at the most unexpected times.

    Good job
    Welcome to P.R.
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Memories can never be erased and it always
    lingers within us..coming to visit us..good write :)