Bereft Of Your Love.

I'm left clinging to reflections
of past's imperfections.
^
And Just maybe
I promise to never love again
until i read this piece
SO BEAUTIFUL
I mean really really well done (:

Wooow... this poem is so beautiful that it swept me away! I looooved every word! I can really relate to the emotions you've expressed in this poem and maybe that's why I feel so attached to it... Wonderful job!

Wow I'm really taken away after reading this. I love how you craft this masterpiece. I love you you used diamonds as a metaphor for the tears that fall off your eyes. Excellent work

I really liked this line, may I borrow it? Credits would go to you. :3

impossible it is to bereave
a love I once believed.
I'm left clinging to reflections
of past's imperfections.
without you by my side-
diamonds start to fall
from these eyes.

Temps, I absolutely loved the flow and ease of this piece and how it read such a sad expression right into my face. I felt the meaning to be profoundly strong here especially, and your words need not be fancy or impressive but, rang true, as painful as that may be.

Wonderfully written, enjoy your Spring!

~MaryAnne