I just read this and was amazed because it's so true. It's true, it's reality and it's sad. I read it to my dad and he loved it as well. He said that it needs to be a song. But anyways, I think you are very talented and this poem speaks volumes. Wow. Just wow. Keep writing.
love,
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Meaningful write... We should really value everything that we have. Well done! Keep it up! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

I really really love this poem. So beautiful and so sad but every word of it is true. I guess you don't appreciate the things you have ~ Liz ~