by Yakari Gabriel Apr 2, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
One last time |
by victoria
Very emtional. i really liked this poem. I understand the concept of lying just to make the person happy. very well written...the only thing i would change is the beginning...i think its just missing a few minor words but other than that it is perfection. great job!!!! |
Like she said, "Wow". I really couldn't say it any better. Maybe you might enjoy reading my, "Stone Angel In Flight". :) |
by victoria
Wow...that was seriously deep. so emtional. so well written. amazing!! |