Wow...that was seriously deep. so emtional. so well written. amazing!!

victoria

Like she said, "Wow". I really couldn't say it any better. Maybe you might enjoy reading my, "Stone Angel In Flight". :)

Very emtional. i really liked this poem. I understand the concept of lying just to make the person happy. very well written...the only thing i would change is the beginning...i think its just missing a few minor words but other than that it is perfection. great job!!!!

victoria