Aaaah I fell completely in love with this piece! The feeling of wishing someone was there by you still although they are not and still keeping them in your heart. I know the pain you go through, how it does seem like the hardest of days when you can't stop thinking about them. They always remain in your thoughts because they've impacted your life in an unforgettable way. Brilliant Joe, I loved this very much. What a beautiful, yet sorrowful song.

THis is written very nicely..the sadness in your words could be felt and the aches of
separation is felt throughout..touching song.

Very nice. When love ends for whatever reason I think we all have gone through the emotions expressed in this piece and they are some of the hardest days we live. Well done.

These sad poems are touching me so deep..u put so much feelings in there and suchjh bitter emotions and hard situations into sad words that can break the ice of patience !!!!!

this poem was freely sadly beautiful with its wording..verse and free from..
was sure sad and related.

Close my eyes, I see our compassion
engraved forever from deep within.
These are the days,
The hardest days I'll know.
my favorite..ur ending lines
always ring a bell u knw

5/5
keep going