by Italian Stallion Apr 2, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Butterflies take over my thoughts |
by Sunshine
..a heartfelt poem..with so many emotions..it really got to me incredibly. u no bet have put so MUCH emotions in this poem which u worded in a very poetic way and in a real talent.. |
by Jad
This was a very sad poem and you get the emotion across very well. I could see with your nice description of someone looking at a picture and longing at them. Very sad but good. |
by Meena Krish
The pain of losing a loved one keeps us going in one way or the other & its very hard |
Aww Joey.. this is so deeply sad. You express your emotions so well. *hugs* Another really great write, you have great talent that will take you far. :] Keep it up! |
by Sylvia
I got an intense feeling of sadness as I read this. It's almost as if it is a song to an angel in heaven. It is full of emotion and tugs at the heart strings. Well done. |