I got an intense feeling of sadness as I read this. It's almost as if it is a song to an angel in heaven. It is full of emotion and tugs at the heart strings. Well done.

Aww Joey.. this is so deeply sad. You express your emotions so well. *hugs* Another really great write, you have great talent that will take you far. :] Keep it up!

The pain of losing a loved one keeps us going in one way or the other & its very hard
to erase those memories...the depth of pain
in your heart is felt through your words..touching..take care.

This was a very sad poem and you get the emotion across very well. I could see with your nice description of someone looking at a picture and longing at them. Very sad but good.

..a heartfelt poem..with so many emotions..it really got to me incredibly. u no bet have put so MUCH emotions in this poem which u worded in a very poetic way and in a real talent..
you do have a very special touch when ur putting ur feelings through ur words..
so if this is a personal poem,..then u have done such an impressing job..and if its not..then it makes it more amazing..because I have beeen deeply deeply touched.

Write more soon
5/5
A smile for the girl out of reach
as I peer into the sky.

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Soaked with tears
from the moonlit sky,

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They say love can kill or simply make your world
but for me it's neither when I'm all alone,
smiling for the girl that's out of reach.

>>what an imagination u got !.......my fav lines