:O OMG GIRL!!! this is your best poem to date, holy shizz...im sorry but im at a loss for words, this is effing incredible :) I LIKE IT A LOT!!! <3

Wish i could give this one a 10/10 :)

Nicely done hun.
But try not to repeat lines to much
It tends to let the poem lose impact.
Overall..
Great job.