Realy nice peom heart full poetry..

and my favorite lines are

I just have one request before you go--

please don't forget to remember me.

Okay,
I promised to look around through some of your stuff,so here I am...
I read this,this morning before school..
I started my comment but then was running late -_-

anyways,
let me just start by saying..
that as soon as I was done reading..
the first thing that came to mind...was
someone like you by adele...

Its just the feeling of grieving about someone..
and till having heart enough to wish them the best..

it is a truly admirable thing...
on the other hand,
I had to use my dictionary app a few times here..
but I did pleasantly...
this poem,speaks to volumes..
I can see this was a poem in which you
are directly involved,
you can tell everything in this piece is real...

the metaphors were delicious..
and just the structure and everything...
perfect pauses,
There wasn't a thing I didn't like..

I pictured a girl crawled up in the bed crying,
but by the time I was reaching the end
she had already stand on her feet...
and was ready to move on...

lovely Imaginary..
I just have to say,
I totally get why this has the "win" behind it..
it totally deserved it.. ;)

mwaa

This was beautiful.

Wow! you are fantastic! Our need to be remembered,very well conveyed.

Wow I felt every word you penned here.
"Tangled in a web of chicanery-
searching for an escape
from this intricate situation. "
These words sent a wave of sadness through me.
I felt myself in these words. Which I love cause the more I connect to the poem I'm reading, the more I enjoy reading them.

"Faith is but a faint light
of apple cinnamon scent-"

Apple cinnamon scent-- that is a really interesting description. Very unique.

"Tears cling to my wan cheeks of loss-
never quelling this discomfort.
Ingenuous was I, and yet--

I deserve to pay this price?"

I love the ending question in this stanza.
Seems to be a turning point, a defining empowering moment for the character you are writing about.

And last but FAR from least the ending...
"This may leave me in debt-
struggling to make frayed ends meet.
But I will smile each day-
for you have a beautiful beginning-
one of which you are most deserving of.

I just have one request before you go--

please don't forget to remember me."

This is amazing! My favorite part my far, it shows the raw emotion of a person trying to let go of someone they loved so wholeheartedly... Being torn wanting nothing but happiness for that person, but not wanting to left behind... Forgotten.

Amazing imagery, masterpiece in my book.
5/5
Jenn.

I just have one request before you go--

please don't forget to remember me.

i like this! :)

Ma'am...this is awesome. This may sound cliche, but I've put someone through this and have also been through this. It seems I'm also going through it again. I saw the title and was reluctant to read it - I was just about to write a song that I was going to call "Forget". It hurt to read it, but I'm glad I did. Old emotions remind us all that we're human and not infallible.

I'm often called cold hearted and evil by friends, but from a warm place in that cold stone of mine; great write :)