by Kuro Apr 6, 2010
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Carry me away |
by Rachel RTVW
What a nice feeling I got from reading this short little gem. Haiku though one of the shortest forms, is also difficult to make profound or memorable because you only have 3 lines to work with. You did a nice job with the picture painting imagery and the feeling the piece gives you. |
by Meena Krish
A nice Haiku which welcomes the summer... |
by Lady Nik
Good poem Benny :] I want to be carried away too. I liked this piece, made me feel hopeful. Nik |
by Sylvia
What a lovely thought, to be carried away by a summer wind. Well done. |
Beautiful, & makes the reader long for that tranquility as well. Very nice. |