by Dreamofolwin
Nice Haiku Ben.. :)... Can just feel the summer breeze! Lol. Awesome. |
by Jad
This was a nice Haiku of enjoying a summer breeze. You followed all the guide lines and it is perfect. Good job. |
Beautiful, & makes the reader long for that tranquility as well. Very nice. |
by Sylvia
What a lovely thought, to be carried away by a summer wind. Well done. |
by Lady Nik
Good poem Benny :] I want to be carried away too. I liked this piece, made me feel hopeful. Nik |
by Meena Krish
A nice Haiku which welcomes the summer... |
by Rachel RTVW
What a nice feeling I got from reading this short little gem. Haiku though one of the shortest forms, is also difficult to make profound or memorable because you only have 3 lines to work with. You did a nice job with the picture painting imagery and the feeling the piece gives you. |