by White Orchid
I really liked this poem, just talking about the days activities, but I really loved it!! Good write!!!! love ya. |
by Kuro
You have the tendency to make comparisons of your feelings to nature. i think your personality could possibly be coming out into your writing. keep up the good work. |
The poem shows you are gratful for the little things in life that not many are. |
Aww.. wow! I loved this poem! So simple yet so powerful and well-written... I love the repetition of today's importance.. And I love how you write about simple events that occur on a daily basis, yet you show how they make today important... So beautiful! Great job! |
by William Mae
I love this poem, its the feelings and moments of now that makes life important. not yesterdays memories or tomorrows maybe's, but the moments of today. beautiful |
by Chima
Good piece though i saw where some fittings could do Like"when reading a novel at sunrise'' that phrase was nice but i think it would be better if you replaced the *SUNRISE WITH SUNSET* it would be a nice ending to a delightful show. thumbs up with natures work 4/5 |
by Midnight Sky
That is good job really nice write about anybody lol |
Another great write! |
by Ingrid
..and all things you mentioned are free of charge, as the best things in Life are! |
by Vic Johns
Simple, yet deep & purposeful at the same time! |