by tainted melody Apr 7, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
For once in my life can I sustain peace of mind |
by White Orchid
Very emotional poem, but I really loved it. I can relate to the line about for once can good conquer disappointment! This was very powerful and this one is going in my favs too! |
by Kuro
Nice theme. you did a lot with the phrase "for once in my life" without it sounding like it was too over done. and a lot of things rang true. |
by Hebe
Nice poem. |