Comments : For once

  • 14 years ago

    by Hebe

    Nice poem.
    Like the way you wrote it.
    Emotional.
    a well written poem.

    Take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Nice theme. you did a lot with the phrase "for once in my life" without it sounding like it was too over done. and a lot of things rang true.

    ~thanks for sharing
    ~Kuro

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Very emotional poem, but I really loved it. I can relate to the line about for once can good conquer disappointment! This was very powerful and this one is going in my favs too!