Comments : The Painful Truth

  • 13 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    "Hands are tied
    Mouth sewn shut
    Falling in place
    Running forever"

    Just beautiful. Much like the rest of your poem. however a little bit of advice, try seperating your poems by stanzas for greater effect or smoother transitioning.

    overall great.

  • 13 years ago

    by I Dont Care Bear

    Thank you very very much!