Sylvia this was excellent poem showing what Liquor can do to people and sadly though many people today fall victim to it. You clearly stress that it doesn't take away problems like many people think but causes them. Good job.

Alcohol destroys family lives and this addiction goes out of control robbing people
of their happines..a very good message!

Alcohol does indeed destroy so many things. family , the own person lives, creates problems, ect. youve listed them all. its sad and very hard to live with someone who depends so much on alcohol to "solve their problems" when really it does only create more . ive witnessed it myself, and its hard to watch someone like that just throw their life away. brilliant job.

Well my view on alcoholism is a bit different from yours. but that would mainly be because i am a 21 year old college student with a bit of depression. that's not to say my reasons to drink are any less harmful in the long run.

i can still see the point you made, and it was quite a profound write. nice job
~Kuro