Satan

by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy   Apr 9, 2010


Satan,
he cant stand me,
as he stands up his
chair made of skulls
and straightens his
back.

He tells words
that attack me.
"Here in Hell it hasn't
been a pleasure,so i
am to send you with
my so called twin,
in you're own private
hell"

Well that's awesome!I
would think,right??...
yes but though I am
wrong! She was so
strong as she pulled
me along and her name
was written on walls
in blood"Natas"

"she has bitten many
vampires"
i hear this as she moves
me along.
"here is your lifelong job,
you will be here for a couple
thousand years."

she said this as my head
throbs.
I do not suffer.
I do not stutter,
nor puffer.

Here in my own private
hell it is slightly tougher.

Natas comes to me and
says
"You will grow you're black
wings tonight! I remember
when i got my wings,though
that was more then a million
years ago!"

You hear the others
asking"is it really tonight?!?"
I would reply maybe.

at exactly midnight,I
started to feel pain,and
then screams I was going
insane.

Natas would say
"this isn't normal!"
everything around me
would remain quiet.

After a while she froze
my body so the pain
wasn't so intense.
Those damn wing kept
coming.Everything
around me was so damn:

irregular..
painful..
pitiful...

Natas wasn't exactly ugly.
she wasn't beautiful either.
It doesn't help telling her as
she doesn't care about her
appearance. she was old and
wrinkly her heart was cold
and bitter, long hair parted in
the middle, so white, like a
vampire.

But please remember, it helped.
the worst part was that it was
already mid-November.I wake
up and shake trying to put the
pieces together from my last dream

My mind ached as I try to remember:
"Natas" which is Satan's name back-wards.

alright here is the trick,i woke up early last night and wrote it and i am not done,ill try finishing it though please rate and comment

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  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Deep, dark, and haunting...thats why i like ur writings.lol. id seperate it into stanzas though. much easier to read. and i dont know if u wanted to describe the "name of natas" but i would maybe change it abit and add some vivid imagery or something in that place(your good at that)..then at the end of the poem maybe inform the reader that Natas is Satan spelled backwords or something. other than that i loved it! great job.

    victoria

  • 14 years ago

    by Chris aka Reaper

    Ok
    your shit is brutal
    Love it
    10/10
    <3