Ok
your shit is brutal
Love it
10/10
<3

Deep, dark, and haunting...thats why i like ur writings.lol. id seperate it into stanzas though. much easier to read. and i dont know if u wanted to describe the "name of natas" but i would maybe change it abit and add some vivid imagery or something in that place(your good at that)..then at the end of the poem maybe inform the reader that Natas is Satan spelled backwords or something. other than that i loved it! great job.

victoria