by Meena Krish
Another form..it sounds hard but really isn't. |
Reminds us to have fun once in a while. Did not even know this little holiday existed. Interesting form & a wonderful job. |
by Jad
Excellent job Sylvia with the form. You did a great job painting a picture of someone having fun on their birthday. Keep writing. |
by Anthony M
Cool form, loved the message as I live by it everyday. |
Loved this. So full of life and optimism. |
by Dreamofolwin
Hey, this has a great feel to it Sylvia ! Love it :) I wish everyday where like this.. HaHa. Joking. A brilliant feel good poem... and I LOVE the form! Fantastic. |
by anand singh
Inspirational and beautiful indeed. |