You fell in love with me...

by klaudia   Apr 11, 2010


Crazy thoughts are running through my head,
Keep thinking about that night we had,
I close my eyes and I see you,
And I keep smiling to myself.

You told me your biggest secrets,
Danced with me, without music,
Kept looking for a shooting star,
So I can wish forever to be in your heart.

Those kisses you gave me that night,
Your embrace how you held me so tight,
Never wished for that feeling to go,
Just wanted to be with you and have more.

Told our stories, laughed a lot,
Held my hand and walked under the stars,
Looked in your eyes and I realized
You fell in love with me...So did I.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jess

    I liked this. A few mistakes, but as you know mistakes can be fixed! I give it 5/5(: Keep up the good work darlinn! :))

    Will you comment on one of mine to return the favor?

    thanks love!

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    I liked the poem, it was a nice read. And although the flow was a bit rough it didnt seem forced. Keep it up.