by Dreamofolwin Apr 11, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Hazy sun up high |
Beautiful, you put us in this special moment just as if we were experiencing it ourselves. :] |
by Jad
This poem had great imagery and I could feel the breeze against my face as I read it. Good job with the form and Keep writing. |
by Sylvia
Olwin, you used a form (smiles). Loved this Haiku. I could see the sun and feel the breeze. Well done. |