Comments : Unforgiven

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Loved this. When you trust someone completely and then they betray you, it is devastating, especially when your emotions are involved! Sometimes it is sooo hard to forgive someone for the things they have done, but it truly is healthy to do so even if it is hard. I loved your poem and the emotion was raw and you just said how you felt which was what made it good.