I Don't Mind

by StillxBreathing   Apr 11, 2010


You get tired when it rains.
But falling asleep, you say is a pain,
When I'm stuck on your mind.
And I don't mind at all.

When playing, you smile easy.
All your come-ons sound so cheesey,
When you're wanting me.
And I don't mind at all.

You ask permission before you act.
Swear you had a heart attack,
When you first met me.
And I don't mind at all.

I wish you'd think before you spoke.
Leaning in, you always choke,
When trying to kiss me.
But I don't mind at all.

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  • 14 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Pretty cool stuff.

  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I liked the repetion of the last line in each stanza. It gave it a rounded quality. I do, though, think the first stanza was your weakest. The wording in the first stanza was just (I sencerely apologise for this next word, but i couldn't think of a better one) weak. I did like the innocence of the second stanza, and I think, for that reason, the second one has to be my favorite. To be honest, I think, adding, maybe two more stanzas, would really help the repetition of the last line (not that I actually know what i'm talking about)

    Brad

    P.S. Pealse vote and comment on every poem you read.

    P.P.S. Sorry if anything I said sounded insulting in any way.

  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Excellent flow and rhyming 5/5

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