Excellent flow and rhyming 5/5

I liked the repetion of the last line in each stanza. It gave it a rounded quality. I do, though, think the first stanza was your weakest. The wording in the first stanza was just (I sencerely apologise for this next word, but i couldn't think of a better one) weak. I did like the innocence of the second stanza, and I think, for that reason, the second one has to be my favorite. To be honest, I think, adding, maybe two more stanzas, would really help the repetition of the last line (not that I actually know what i'm talking about)

Brad

P.S. Pealse vote and comment on every poem you read.

P.P.S. Sorry if anything I said sounded insulting in any way.

Pretty cool stuff.