This was a very powerful/well written peice.
i think it was a little bit more like a poem then lyrics however.

Wow you have a very strong voice in this write/song, although its rather on the sad side you do end it on a possitive note. It carries a very strong message, so come on now take the world by the tail and give it a good shake to let them know the real you is here. Well done. Grant

Beautiful and very interesting. I would love to hear the song, indubitably, its as beautiful as the lyrics :)