Bumpy Road

by Joey P   Apr 13, 2010


Your bottle is full and needs to explode
I know the feeling of losing control
If you take my hand and take a chance
I promise this will forever last
So while we walk this bumpy road
Lets toss our bottles to the banks below
All the people that made our bottles crack
may the walk on our broken glass
I know its hard and the past stings
but now thats over and we can begin
Without the pain I would have never of found
The perfect woman who is ment for it all
My dust will burn, and your snow may blast
Down this bumpy road we walk...
away from the past

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  • 13 years ago

    by Joey P

    It was written by my boyfriend at the time and he was in IRAQ hence the sand/dust burn and it was winter where i was hence the snow may blast as in blast you with its cool winds. But I do get how you are viewing it. If i was the writer of it, it would not have been written as such.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessie

    I really enjoyed this piece:) but the grammar and spelling need work.... as well this line
    "My dust will burn, and your snow may blast" doesnt seem to make sense to me.... maybe "Your snow will burn, and my dust will _______"

    to me.... snow should be the one burning (melting away) but it is your piece, and your interpretation:) good work:)

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