I really enjoyed this piece:) but the grammar and spelling need work.... as well this line
"My dust will burn, and your snow may blast" doesnt seem to make sense to me.... maybe "Your snow will burn, and my dust will _______"

to me.... snow should be the one burning (melting away) but it is your piece, and your interpretation:) good work:)

It was written by my boyfriend at the time and he was in IRAQ hence the sand/dust burn and it was winter where i was hence the snow may blast as in blast you with its cool winds. But I do get how you are viewing it. If i was the writer of it, it would not have been written as such.