Stillness

by tainted melody   Apr 14, 2010


Why cant the words come out that are pounding in my mind

Why cant you say the way you think and feel

Why does the joy of love come with tears and pain.

Why is the only one who can comfort me have to be the one who broke me in the first place.

Why does the smallest silence fill my mind with doubt

Why cant you just say I love you

Why do your words affect me like they do

Why cant you just wipe the tears away with a glance

Why cant your hug release this tension

Why cant you just say I love you .

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  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Hey I really liked this poem! The feeling of love is great and painful at the same time! Loved this, this is going in my favs!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Love is the only feeling that can hurt and feel good at the same time.

    only thing i can say to improve this is maybe use more punctuation like commas and periods to give it more steady flow.

    nice job

  • 14 years ago

    by Rhi

    It was great and i totally related to it as well
    well done well written :)

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