Comments : Stillness

  • 14 years ago

    by Rhi

    It was great and i totally related to it as well
    well done well written :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Love is the only feeling that can hurt and feel good at the same time.

    only thing i can say to improve this is maybe use more punctuation like commas and periods to give it more steady flow.

    nice job

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Hey I really liked this poem! The feeling of love is great and painful at the same time! Loved this, this is going in my favs!!