Amazing poem......
you have been able to express your emotions so clearly that it feels like that the reader is the one going through these emotions.

Very heartbreaking, but also a glimpse of hope in the end.

Time to move on, move on....

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Hmmm... interesting n a narrative one..... Keep it up...;)

It is a great read and would be awesome to be sung hopefully one day someone will read this and be inspired great work 5/5