Smile and Wave

by Kuro   Apr 14, 2010


Hatred in my music
Blaring in my ears
Feeling discouraged
Hiding inner tears

From the corner of my eye
I felt eyes upon me
The innocence of a child's
Curiosity

I turned and saw
His honest eyes
Pause my music
Out of surprise

And here I thought
People were gray
A smile from a child
Brightened my day
He smiled and waved
Then went on his way

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is realy full of extreme innocence..well done.. i was impressed by these lines u knw..realy had my eye brows up haha...well i thank u for asking me to over look this one..

    was my pleasure
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    This was a great poem, I am finding I like your stuff! I like how just this simple thing about a kid waving can actually brighten up our day!! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Any day, any problem, any strugle, and under any cirmcumstances...a child can surely make you smile. If not, you're a peanut! HA! Very nicely written poem my friend! I loved it's simplicity and quick flow! Very nice! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    It is short and sweet and i can really realate very strongly to this in several ways, reminds me of my kid brother and personal choice of music. so i guess that would be why it's landed in my favorites! Nice work, and i've nominated as well. <3

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Children have a way of making us smile with the simpliest thing like a wave hello to us. Well done.