Comments : Smile and Wave

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Aww, such a beautiful touching write! I love it :) Its amazing what a child can do to brighen your day... Lol, it really is. Excellent piece Ben... Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This almost brings tears to my eyes. It is like Olwin said such an amazing thing how a smile from a child, so innocent and beautiful can make our day so much better. What an adorable write you have penned .

  • 14 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I love poems about the simple things in life that bring you joy, and kudos to you for taking a happy poem and still making it sound not corny.^_^

  • 14 years ago

    by Sadespair

    Aw, i this is really simply cute :)
    haha, as weird as that sounds I liked it and yes it is strange when a little strange child can make your day with just a smile, Maybe it's a sense of hope.?. I love your poetry :)
    -sadez :)(:

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Children have a way of making us smile with the simpliest thing like a wave hello to us. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    It is short and sweet and i can really realate very strongly to this in several ways, reminds me of my kid brother and personal choice of music. so i guess that would be why it's landed in my favorites! Nice work, and i've nominated as well. <3

  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Any day, any problem, any strugle, and under any cirmcumstances...a child can surely make you smile. If not, you're a peanut! HA! Very nicely written poem my friend! I loved it's simplicity and quick flow! Very nice! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    This was a great poem, I am finding I like your stuff! I like how just this simple thing about a kid waving can actually brighten up our day!! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is realy full of extreme innocence..well done.. i was impressed by these lines u knw..realy had my eye brows up haha...well i thank u for asking me to over look this one..

    was my pleasure
    5/5