by Dreamofolwin
Aww, such a beautiful touching write! I love it :) Its amazing what a child can do to brighen your day... Lol, it really is. Excellent piece Ben... Well done! |
This almost brings tears to my eyes. It is like Olwin said such an amazing thing how a smile from a child, so innocent and beautiful can make our day so much better. What an adorable write you have penned . |
I love poems about the simple things in life that bring you joy, and kudos to you for taking a happy poem and still making it sound not corny.^_^ |
by Sadespair
Aw, i this is really simply cute :) |
by Sylvia
Children have a way of making us smile with the simpliest thing like a wave hello to us. Well done. |
by Shelby G.
It is short and sweet and i can really realate very strongly to this in several ways, reminds me of my kid brother and personal choice of music. so i guess that would be why it's landed in my favorites! Nice work, and i've nominated as well. <3 |
by Natalie84
Any day, any problem, any strugle, and under any cirmcumstances...a child can surely make you smile. If not, you're a peanut! HA! Very nicely written poem my friend! I loved it's simplicity and quick flow! Very nice! :) |
by White Orchid
This was a great poem, I am finding I like your stuff! I like how just this simple thing about a kid waving can actually brighten up our day!! :) |
by Sunshine
This is realy full of extreme innocence..well done.. i was impressed by these lines u knw..realy had my eye brows up haha...well i thank u for asking me to over look this one.. |