Trees Blossoming...

by Dreamofolwin   Apr 15, 2010


The trees are full of blossom
and my heart just sheds a tear.
So many promises given...
hopes of having you so near.

I wrapped my dreams around you,
saw the starlight in your eyes.
Wanting you forever...
held so tightly 'neath the skies.

But like the flowers that blossom,
which come and go what may...
My heart shall wait forever,
til I see you, some fine day.

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  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Lovely and great use of words :) keep it up!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Olwin
    What a beautiful poem :) Congrats on tieing for the first place for the Think Spring contest :)

    I wrapped my dreams around you,
    saw the starlight in your eyes.
    Wanting you forever...
    held so tightly 'neath the skies.

    How hard it is sometime to love someone in our dreams. I wait in my dreams to be reunited with my true love.

    But like the flowers that blossom,
    which come and go what may...
    My heart shall wait forever,
    til I see you, some fine day.

    One day the time will come :) What a heart warming piece Olwin filled with such sweet loving emotions.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    A very warm and wonderful piece, well penned with honest love for that someone special.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice and loving thoughts. I wish I could say them to someone as well. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Such a lovely soft piece :] It's so filled with amazing imagery and I really love how I felt while reading this. Very nice work dear. Nik