Temps you never and I do repeat never stop amazing me with your poetry. You can make something so simple and paint a beautiful picture and with such good description and depth. Good write and keep writing.

A nice poem to write about your friendship with someone. Good job.

This was beautiful Temps, it started out so intense to me, there was a mouthful of description and it only got better. I loved how you added the questions on the end that made the reader smile, well done. You put this together well and I felt such a sense of happiness.

Keep on writing girl!

~MaryAnne

Temps
Great job on your poetry tag challenge :) You seem to have gotten everything Joe asked for :) Great imagery and word choices.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

Wow. your use of vocabulary was amazing. the words seemed so refined. eloquent even. you have quote the way with words.